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For Kyle:
Your essay is good but there a few things you should change. When you talk about how her style is magical, you should really say her writing is based on fiction and imagery. Also you should give transitions between your three prompts so then your readers won't get confused when they read your final draft.

For Alyssa:
Your essay sounds very good and is well written. However, you should end the essay stronger with a better conclusion- your last paragraph does not sound like a conclusion. Also in your second to last paragraph, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Otherwise, good essay.

For Max:
God essay. There are some grammar mistakes:
"you dies" (?)
"The purpose or the reason in which I believe the author is writing about this, or telling this story is to tell history" (you're basically using words that are the same)
Also, i don't think you need to mention your blog post in final draft.
Also, don't use the word you.
You should talk more about peeta and katniss.